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Why father? eng hela låten!

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2007-12-05 20:46

Why father? eng hela låten!

(vers 1)
Never thought this could happen in my world//
So why father you want me to get hurt//
Youve said youd change but your just the same/
You made my heart scream to get out the pain/
I dont cry tears anymore i just cry out my soul/
When youve been around in my life ive never felt whole/
Getting punshes in the face, i dont walla live no more/
So dont feel sure about me staying in your home/
And it have been so close, me walkin out that door/
And ill be leavin with pride, showin no regrets leavin this floor/
You chose to leave my side, and to hide your feelings/
You made me regret so much that cant even breath in/
You only left scars in my life and the wounds are deep in/
And theres no one to heal it, loneliness makes me feel sick/
So i wont ever forget, and ill never forgive/
I put my words on that threat for as long as i live/

(vers 2)
Sometimes i wanna cry over things youve said/
But i realised drunk and sover are not the same/
You made me scared only thinkin of your name/
I was the one you put on the blame, never faith/
And ive been running for days, away from the hate/
That you tried to create, and it feels like ive been made/
To feel pain and to get to pay, for your mistakes/
But ill never let myself break, cause im strong, feelin OK/
Ill never give up, i will fight, on the inside/
But it feels like im loosin, takin over the cruel shit/
Fightin, tryin to heal the bruises, surrounded by bullshit/
Its hard getting through with it, even harder livin it/
Life, no surprise, but its full of lies/
Making me feel weak, a thing i wont survive/
Its like a language, that ill never learn to speak/
And for me, having a normal life is a dream/

enjoy! kommentera mycket!:D

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2007-12-05 20:50
Getting punshes in the face, i dont wanna live no more.
så ska det stå i första versen. jag råkade skriva walla istället för wanna ^^
It's better to give unasked, then giving asked.

2007-12-06 22:01
andra raden på andra versen står det fel oxå såg jag nu...
det står ju drunk and sover det ska vara drunk and sober
It's better to give unasked, then giving asked.

2007-12-06 23:33
tycker texten va helt okej, den stack ut lite mer på vissa ställen!

känner igen mig på en hel del rader också, väldigt gripande och verklighets trogen känns texten vara.
känner igen mig som sagt, t.ex

Sometimes i wanna cry over things youve said/
But i realised drunk and sover are not the same/

Kanske behövs lite slipning, men i helhet.. bra text!
Håller en bra röd tråd!

stayblessed/rayson
who´s side is god really on?

2007-12-07 17:05
tack så hemskt mycket för kommentaren:) kändes bra att få en sån första kommentar:) tråkigt ändå att du känner igen dig i vissa saker i texten. men tack för kommentaren:)
It's better to give unasked, then giving asked.

2007-12-07 19:43
det är inga problem, har aldrig konstigt nog, lagt märke till dig i lyricism forumet.. hehe. tråkigt nog, men som sagt, fin text !  keep it up!
who´s side is god really on?
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2007-12-08 17:44
:O:O fett bra juuuuu upp!
And I was better where I was miserable, why didn't you leave me there?

2007-12-09 19:46
upp! tycker att den här texten förtjänar mer kommentarer:)
It's better to give unasked, then giving asked.

2007-12-11 22:55
upp!!
It's better to give unasked, then giving asked.

2007-12-16 22:50

tycker seriöst att den här texten förtjänar mer kommentarer...

It's better to give unasked, then giving asked.

2007-12-22 16:48
uppp era F*TT Slickare!!!!!
It's better to give unasked, then giving asked.